Please examine the assigned IODP Proceedings manuscript and comment on
its scientific quality, originality, and clarity of expression. In addition
to your criticisms of and comments on scientific aspects of the work, suggestions
for improvement of the report language, organization, and presentation
will be welcome.
Please address each topic listed in this questionnaire. More detailed
comments may be added in the space provided. Suggestions, minor corrections,
and comments may be made on the manuscript.